The Direhorse by Bradley T and Emma

The viscous creature, with blood-red eyes and dark, scaly skin, blends in with the shadows stalking it’s prey. Without warning, the squiddle is squashed by the Direhorse’s heavy hooves, which end the squiddle’s pain and misery. Wolfing down the tiny animal, the Direhorse plodded off, hoping to have a nice, long peaceful nap.

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4 Responses to The Direhorse by Bradley T and Emma

  1. Leon says:

    This is a great blog post I love blood red eyes. what will happen next? I don’t thinks theres anything to improve.

  2. Nanami says:

    I think you included a lot of wonderful adjectives .
    You also included lots of different complex sentences , and because your writing is so emotional it makes me want to read the rest of the Story!
    Well done you are brilliant in writing story’s !

  3. jack says:

    I really like this blog post you have described a blood sucking horse WELLDONE:)

  4. Joe O'H says:

    I thought this post had a lot of hard work put into it. Very good Emma and Bradley

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