The Thick Skinned Hammer Head Tythanasaurus By Joseph&Steffi

This thundering creature,with blood piercing eyes,roams Pandora with stampeding feet. Suddenly,she raises her rainbow like arrow feathers and glares at her next meal – a Heffon. She storms over to the Heffon and flicks it up into the air and swallows it whole.

MUNCH!!!

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5 Responses to The Thick Skinned Hammer Head Tythanasaurus By Joseph&Steffi

  1. Jadryl says:

    This amazing writing I like your description and where did you get the inspiration?.Next time you could describe the meal better.

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  2. Mr W. says:

    Great descriptive writing – I like your use of different sentence starters too.

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  3. Joe O'Hara says:

    This is brilliant!It seems very dangerous.

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  4. Eva and Olaf says:

    We like your powerfull words inside this post, we always like the end part ( MUNCH )

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  5. Eva and Olaf says:

    Could you use more commas?

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