Viper Wolf By Caitlin and Lewie

This unmerciful, rotten, meat eating creature, with pin point teeth, savages the land of Pandora. His illumanus sliver eyes spies his prey: a Catrmunk. His steathly  movement gives him the advantage against the Catrmunk. He spots the Catrmunk snoozing on the bark of the highest tree in Pandora. He takes the full opportunity of this chance and gets his steel, hard claws out the Catrmunk fainted in fear. WHAT WILL HE DO TO THE CATRMUNK NEXT…

 

 

 

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6 Responses to Viper Wolf By Caitlin and Lewie

  1. Francesca says:

    Great description, I really enjoyed your writing.

  2. Olivia says:

    I really enjoyed reading you paragraph about the Viper wolf because you used a lot od description to describe the Viper Wolf. Well done 🙂

  3. Caitlin says:

    Hi Olivia and Francesca,
    Thank you for your coments I am sure Lewie will like them as well.
    Thanks again,
    Caitlin

  4. Steffi says:

    I love the great the describing words you have both put in you writing. I also love the name you named your creature the Catrmunk. What two animals is it crossed with.
    well done Caitlin and Lewie.
    🙂

  5. niamh says:

    Great I really enjoyed that post and my favourite part was his steathly movement because it described two things one that it shows his movment and second because it says how he is feeling. What do you think you could add?

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