Viper Wolf by Sadie and Jadryl

As the moon rose up in the sky,the selfish face of carelesness emerged. The cold hearted , stubborn raged monster surrenders …  The faint whiff of a meal ready to be killed . His eagle eyes were focused on his prey . He saw the bait , the small thing …. BANG , in this net of confusion .

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3 Responses to Viper Wolf by Sadie and Jadryl

  1. Niamh says:

    well done That made me shiver! Very good description I liked when you said selfish face of carelesness emerged because it described how he is feeling and facail expressions. What do you think you could add next time? 🙂

  2. Lewie says:

    It’s very good because of your word choice but part of it doesn’t make sense

  3. Nicq says:

    Hi,my name is Nicq you have really good character description and although I had thought that we were the only ones were the best but it turns out that we’re equally the same,so am surprised with this really good text you wrote

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