AVATAR WRITING BY OLAF

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Shadows of enourmous, old oak trees , sprawled a large ramshackled house.

The trees shifted down like  a umbrella.

Suddenly , a tranquil ocean breeze flowed like a prayer.

Bushes standing like ghostly , stooped figures.

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2 Responses to AVATAR WRITING BY OLAF

  1. Enrique says:

    Well done Olaf I love the adjectives that you have used like oak and ram shacked and the lovely simile you have used the trees shifted down like a umbrella. Where did you get your ideas from. You could improve on how it looks like because it looks like a poem. 🙂

  2. Enrique says:

    Well done Olaf I love the adjectives that you have used like oak and ram shacked and the lovely simile you have used the trees shifted down like a umbrella. Where did you get your ideas from. You could improve on how it looks like because it looks like a poem.

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