Pandora

The luminous oasis glistens as night awakens from its slumber . The glowing animals float around the sky, lighting the night with its colour. The water shines like a diamond as it drifts away. Viper Wolves roam the area, while the Floaterfish ( pink flying jellyfish ) floats around this paradise in Pandora.

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2 Responses to Pandora

  1. Emma says:

    Great work Lauren! I really enjoyed reading this. Luminous is sometimes a hard word to use, but you used it well!

  2. Caitlin says:

    Hi Lauren, I agree with Emma. But you could have ended it a bit better. You have done every other thing good. Caitlin

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