Pandora by Leon and Shardaina

This hidden kingdom,which is coverd by fog like a blanket,whatches over pandora.Dagger like cactus spikes threaten to peirce my skin,as a beard of plants cover drifting rocks.The sun light dapples reflections on the tranquil lake,silent regimented trees stand on gaurd,staring at whatever roams by,pointy rocks are surrouned by demons.Jagged edges of rocks made my hand pour out with crimson blood.Terrifying,evil,creepy-would you take the risk and come to pandora?

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4 Responses to Pandora by Leon and Shardaina

  1. Nicola says:

    wow – seriously spooky. I don’t want to go, it sounds terrifying. Did Stephen King help write this? AMAZING!

  2. Beard of plants is fabulous – I can picture it.

  3. Mrs P says:

    Wow. This is an amazing piece of writing – be very proud … and no, I’m not brave enough to risk a visit to Pandora!

  4. Pooky says:

    You paint such a vivid picture, I can imagine in perfectly. I think I’d be far too scared to visit Pandora at first but then my curiosity would get the better of me as I’d just have to know what secrets were hidden on the island! Will you be writing a further installment? I would love to hear more!

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